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Waddup. Let's take a look at 'come with the arms two HOTT '! π₯
Your vocals are a lil' unclear, try playing around with your mic position to get the best take.
The rhyming is well put together. β¨
This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. π
Good choice of beat here! πΌ
The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality.
There's a lot of personality in how you construct tracks, you just gotta clean it up around the edges a bit.
With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. π€
We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! π
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Yo @headofthethrown! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'come with the arms two HOTT '! π₯ Your vocals are a lil' unclear, try playing around with your mic position to get the best take. The rhyming is well put together. β¨ This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. π Good choice of beat here! πΌ The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality. There's a lot of personality in how you construct tracks, you just gotta clean it up around the edges a bit. With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. π€ We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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