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Hey @maverickquest, We appreciate you sharing 'I GIVE UP' with us! ๐ฅ Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! โจ This track defo has meaning, what a great way to engage your listeners. ๐ โIts embarrassing you talk about my suppressed anger, humiliation creates & sets the tone for danger..." - absolute bars right here! ๐ฅ The people will love this! โค๏ธ Sweet work over that beat. Your timing was perfect. Can you improve the quality of your recording a lil'? Its real close but this will really improve the sound of your tracks. Chill AF! Relaxed vibes on this one! We seriously love the vibes here, this is a great track! ๐ Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. ๐ We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! ๐ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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