yoo this is a great track. you should have rehearsed this before recording it. it literally sounds like you're running out of breath the whole time. keep those lungs FULL of air brotha.And don't be afraid to speak up!! don't be a fucking mumbling faggot like the rest of these wack rappers. you have talent. relax your nerves on the mic and show it off
Yo @lilfandy!
Waddup. Let's take a look at 'My Turn'! 💥
Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix.
We like the rhyming, it's tight. ✨
Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. 🎶
The beat is dope and really works for this track. 🎼
You've got the talent. Just give it a lil' more work and this track will be fire!! 🤟
We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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yoo this is a great track. you should have rehearsed this before recording it. it literally sounds like you're running out of breath the whole time. keep those lungs FULL of air brotha.And don't be afraid to speak up!! don't be a fucking mumbling faggot like the rest of these wack rappers. you have talent. relax your nerves on the mic and show it off
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Yo @lilfandy! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'My Turn'! 💥 Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix. We like the rhyming, it's tight. ✨ Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. 🎶 The beat is dope and really works for this track. 🎼 You've got the talent. Just give it a lil' more work and this track will be fire!! 🤟 We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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