Life got me tore up

Name: Life got me tore up
Description: I wouldnt even play this😂. work in progress My first time writing lyrics. I want some help with my lyrics and delivery. this isn't a finished song or one of my original beats. just testing the waters. any help would be dope.

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I wouldnt even play this😂. work in progress My first time writing lyrics. I want some help with my lyrics and delivery. this isn't a finished song or one of my original beats. just testing the waters. any help would be dope.

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DJ OSK

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4 years ago

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Hey @osktricks420, We're gonna review your track 'Life got me tore up'. Let's get it! We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. 🎶 You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼 The overall quality is pretty low, try changing some things to improve the recording. Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! 💪 It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

ShizzaShark Entertainment

5 months ago

good vibes good flow stay lit stay grinding 😎 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉

BeezyBrazy

4 years ago

keep up the good work check out my music in follow me back 💯🔥🔥🤞🏾 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

DJ OSK

Author

4 years ago

wish I wasn't sick🤣

А̿и̿и̿а̿ Э̿л̿и̿з̿а̿б̿е̿т̿

10 days ago