Hey @scrimhill,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'scrimhill- 2022 freestyle Pt.1 '! ๐ฅ
The beat is a lil' too loud for your vocals, try putting it down to get the balance right.
Your bars are real good, keep doin' what your doin'. ๐ Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! โจ The track has meaning. ๐
Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. ๐ถ
Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. ๐ผ
We need to clean up the recording quality here, play around with it and see what you can do!
It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! ๐
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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Hey @scrimhill, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'scrimhill- 2022 freestyle Pt.1 '! ๐ฅ The beat is a lil' too loud for your vocals, try putting it down to get the balance right. Your bars are real good, keep doin' what your doin'. ๐ Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! โจ The track has meaning. ๐ Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. ๐ถ Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. ๐ผ We need to clean up the recording quality here, play around with it and see what you can do! It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! ๐ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ