Hi @mahlymahl!
Welcome to our feedback of 'MAHLY MAHL - CROSS THAT LINE'! π₯
The rhyming is well put together. β¨
Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! Nice timing! You were almost always on the beat.
Good choice of beat here! πΌ
We need to clean up the recording quality here, play around with it and see what you can do! Dope work with the effects, nicely done. β
The delivery is ferocious! Bringin' the heat!
Incredible track here, you defo have what it takes. Keep on doing what you're doing. π₯
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hi @mahlymahl! Welcome to our feedback of 'MAHLY MAHL - CROSS THAT LINE'! π₯ The rhyming is well put together. β¨ Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! Nice timing! You were almost always on the beat. Good choice of beat here! πΌ We need to clean up the recording quality here, play around with it and see what you can do! Dope work with the effects, nicely done. β The delivery is ferocious! Bringin' the heat! Incredible track here, you defo have what it takes. Keep on doing what you're doing. π₯ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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