Hey @o.t.b_palo,
We're gonna review your track 'Persistence '. Let's get it!
We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. π The rhyming is well put together. β¨
Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. πΆ You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those.
Your bars sound amazing over this beat. Great choice!! π§¨
Nice use of vocal effects! Helps your track pop! We just think this track needs a clearer direction in general to really bring all those elements together!
We see the potential here, with a few adjustments we can see the room for progression! π€
We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @o.t.b_palo, We're gonna review your track 'Persistence '. Let's get it! We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. π The rhyming is well put together. β¨ Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. πΆ You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. Your bars sound amazing over this beat. Great choice!! 𧨠Nice use of vocal effects! Helps your track pop! We just think this track needs a clearer direction in general to really bring all those elements together! We see the potential here, with a few adjustments we can see the room for progression! π€ We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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