Persistence

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Mr Bran the Don

4 years ago

nicely done O.T.B_PaLo 💯 🔥 Fam

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Hey @o.t.b_palo, We're gonna review your track 'Persistence '. Let's get it! We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. 🙌 The rhyming is well put together. ✨ Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. 🎶 You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. Your bars sound amazing over this beat. Great choice!! 🧨 Nice use of vocal effects! Helps your track pop! We just think this track needs a clearer direction in general to really bring all those elements together! We see the potential here, with a few adjustments we can see the room for progression! 🤟 We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

👑 Melinated King👑

4 years ago

I see you brother

Jay Villin

2 months ago

Let's GOOO 🍿 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

5Hunna RR

2 months ago

The grind is real, and so is the impact. Every effort is paying off! 💼💰 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Mr.nolo (the endgameboss)

4 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥