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Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Holly Pass - HOTTEST IN MY CITY'! π₯
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What's up @hollyberry318, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Holly Pass - HOTTEST IN MY CITY'! π₯ Feelin' the bars here, we like it! We like the rhymes in here, good job.β¨ Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. πΆ This is how beats and lyrics should go together, you've got great timing, well done! π This beat choice is great for you! πΌ Try improving your recording quality if you can. This would level up your track hella'! Felt this one right here β€οΈ. Great rappers ain't afraid to rap about real shit! Respect! We admire your confidence off the bat! You straight rapping from the heart - this shows us that you know yourself & be doing whatever you wana do regardless of anyone else! π― Your vocals are a lil quiet on this one! Try turning them up so we can get more from your bars! π€ Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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