16 LINEs

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16 LINEs

16 lines send chills down your my spine okay that fine i wants mine time will tell wishing wells please lift the spell strike one strike two thought you knew 16 lines send chills down your my spine you leaving okay that fine you wont get a dime time to let go snort blow smoke ganja dont tell my moma 16 lines 3 6 nine noore life crime sun closing in drop it in let the fun begin just kidding but really shit be confuseing picking and choseing hope im not loseing strike one strike two thought you knew now whatch my shoes 16 lines send chills down your my spine okay that fine i wants mine time will tell wishing wells please lift the spell you leaving okay that fine you wont get a dime time to let go snort blow smoke ganja dont tell my moma 16 lines 3 6 nine noore life crime sun closing in drop it in let the fun begin just kidding but really shit be confuseing

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4 years ago

Hey @thorpeking, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for '16 LINEs'! ๐Ÿ’ฅ Great rhyme skills, you got the poetry flowin'! Your voice flows nicely over the track. Well delivered!! ๐ŸŽถ Your timing is perfect, you're landing perfectly on the beat. ๐ŸŒ  We like how the beat sounds with your voice. ๐ŸŽผ This is super chill, a real nice vibe. ๐ŸŒŠ There's clearly talent there, keep grindin' and soon you will be a top tier rapper. ๐ŸคŸ It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! ๐Ÿ™Œ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐Ÿ˜Ž

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5 years ago

good shit babe

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