Hi @67hildawg!
Welcome to our feedback of 'Open$$$_masBBOOK_π'! π₯
Your vocals sound a bit messy on this, try moving your mic around a little!
The delivery on this track is smooth. πΆ
Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. π
See if you can clean up the recording quality, it's not helping the track.
This track is cute. We love the concept! Some parts are easier to make out than others so def adjust some of the levels. Great voice(s)! Keep it up!
You've got the talent. Just give it a lil' more work and this track will be fire!! π€
We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
Stay on the grind π₯π₯ this is awesome keep it up! Check me out, would love to connect with other talented creators ππ―
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Impression: Dope π₯
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Hi @67hildawg! Welcome to our feedback of 'Open$$$_masBBOOK_π'! π₯ Your vocals sound a bit messy on this, try moving your mic around a little! The delivery on this track is smooth. πΆ Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. π See if you can clean up the recording quality, it's not helping the track. This track is cute. We love the concept! Some parts are easier to make out than others so def adjust some of the levels. Great voice(s)! Keep it up! You've got the talent. Just give it a lil' more work and this track will be fire!! π€ We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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