my lady
you know my lady, jharny baby, love tha way make my body trembling baby, natural higher tha feelings ĺ mutual, you and I synchronising can't let you go, the more I sip on you the more I get drunk yo, top me up , hundred shot's of J.love, coz times up, any moment minutes hours, most of us make it out come tragic, part ways, heart ache tha last time I saw ya love much stronger I'm patiently waiting intouch miss love is this love my heart yelds and yerns for to much to alone with out you is my love to great to understand one feels, it's cold no you to hold, slipped out so alone, I told you so, heart pressous love let go, try stepping on looze control can't be happening beats pounding you got me rapping this so confusing, if I lost site of you my heart aches shock waves makes the whole world shake is this love to great to understand one feels the rhythm in rymes to impress you. my lady on the beach our souls connect, waves crashing stars out full moon, I'm lost in something, 2 worlds collisions, my heart keep stopping, started tha flame
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Yo @shynemlr.6712378! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'my lady'! 💥 We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. 🙌 You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. 🙏 Good choice of beat! 🎼 We just wish the recording quality was improved as this is taking away the potential from this track! Your use of effects is pretty good on this, nicely done! ⭐ This might not be your best track, but keep trying and you'll be there in no time! 👌 We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
thanks for the feed back I've never really heard my voice on a track when my confidence grows I'll smash it.
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