HOLY SHYYT; THUS SONG TOOK MY SOMEWHERE I NEVER WANTED TO COME BACK FROM; SO BRO IM TAKING THIS SONG WIT ME.... THANK YOU; ARE WE STILL WIT SOLO SAVAGES... ??? DAMN BRO IM TEARING UPP ON THIS SHYT... THIS QUALITY; DIVERSITY; DELIVERY; TYMELINE SEPERATIONS; EVERYTHING IS A1 GREAT MESSAGE: THIS WAHT I BE HITTIN FOR G.... 🔥💲🔥💲🔥💸DJ👑MUWLAW💸🔥💲🔥💲

Rap Fame A&R

5 years ago

Hey @jay28official, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'Jay 28 - Disconnected'! 💥 Tight rhymes, love the structure here. ✨ You've thought about what you're trying to say in this track and it shows, nicely done. 👍 “Where the hell does time go? I'm stuck up in these timezones, Like where the hell my mind go? Seeing faces through this iPhone...“ - absolute bars right here! 🔥We love this flow & hella impressed by the lyricism! Its amazing how you have so many different flows and melodies on one track! So musical! 🎶 Smooth delivery here, keep it up! 🎶 Nice timing! Never left the beat once! Great beat choice, really works with the track! We love the recording quality. Keep recording like that!! Good use of vocal effects here, really adds to the track! ⭐ We hope you send us some more tracks in the future, we would love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Jay 28

Author

5 years ago

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Kenneth Schoeb

5 years ago

heat 🔥 keep going brother Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

💥Mr.Lil Nutt🐿️(A.B.R Mobb)💥

10 days ago

Let’s GOOO 🍿 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

⚔️Ty Assassin 🍾

3 months ago