Hey @lilkeyz06,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'First Time'! 💥
The lyrics are fire, nicely done! 🙌
Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! Sweet work over that beat. Your timing was almost perfect.
We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em!
You're a few tweaks away from being very good! Keep putting the work in and you'll get there!
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Hey @lilkeyz06, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'First Time'! 💥 The lyrics are fire, nicely done! 🙌 Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! Sweet work over that beat. Your timing was almost perfect. We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em! You're a few tweaks away from being very good! Keep putting the work in and you'll get there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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