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We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em!
The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality.
You got some lit bars and you flow on this beat so naturally it creates such a bop! You have talent, we just wish the recording quality was improved as this is taking away the potential from this track!
You got talent, you just need to polish your tracks a bit more! You're almost there!
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
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Yo @statebabymusic! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'STATE BABY - JUICE _ Prod. by Melzi Trap _'! π₯ The beat is way too high here, try lowering it so your vocals can shine through! Lit bars, keep 'em comin. π Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! Great timing on this, you're hitting the beat really well! π We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em! The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality. You got some lit bars and you flow on this beat so naturally it creates such a bop! You have talent, we just wish the recording quality was improved as this is taking away the potential from this track! You got talent, you just need to polish your tracks a bit more! You're almost there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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