I dontnunderstand why im.in the position I'm in. pain sorrow and regret begins to feel to kin. I've tried so hard and fought the demons within but no matter what I do they always seem to win.
Mama i hurt please comw.back to the family again I'd do anyhring I can in the world to help you
My family was strong we was one to adore,we was taught discipline manners, how to open a door for a woman doesnt matter the cloths that she wore.
I owe that to my mama she was the queen of my.world. now things have changed and it's her I no longer adore, not out of spite nor anger just put my foot to the floor. What you think? Im.to weak? but im.strong to the core! It’s just mama I hurt
Mama i hurt please comw.back to the family again I'd do anyhring I can in the world to help you
You were the perfect mom and I couldn't ask for one better now I'm grown and realize im no.more than a letter. Cause That's what I delivered in the form.of a man post marked ready to ship with a golden boy tan. How selfish could 2 people ever so be take a family with the slightest flick of a key. Im talking 43 years and grandchildren to be. And you throw it all away just to think you're free. Yet in reality your just a host of a flee. He'll suck you dry til theres no more to see. It's already happened and become look at your destiny you've lost your meaning your purpose and your all family. Mama I beg you what I do isnt cheap I see your value and the cost it's doing to our family. Mama We love you we want you back to reap
But the cut of rejection i fear is just to deep.
Hi @whays!
Welcome to our feedback of 'Maternal Heartache #TDuB#whays#mamaihurt'! 💥
Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, bring it up a lil' to get the balance perfect.
Your rhyming is dope, it sounds real nice. ✨
Love the natural sounding flow here. Very cool! 🎶 Your timing is great, nicely done. 🌠
The beat is fire, awesome choice. 🧨
Nice crisp recording. Sounds great! ✔
It's great how you portray raw emotion in this track, not an easy task but you've done it well! 💜
You've got serious skills, great work! 🔥
We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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I dontnunderstand why im.in the position I'm in. pain sorrow and regret begins to feel to kin. I've tried so hard and fought the demons within but no matter what I do they always seem to win. Mama i hurt please comw.back to the family again I'd do anyhring I can in the world to help you My family was strong we was one to adore,we was taught discipline manners, how to open a door for a woman doesnt matter the cloths that she wore. I owe that to my mama she was the queen of my.world. now things have changed and it's her I no longer adore, not out of spite nor anger just put my foot to the floor. What you think? Im.to weak? but im.strong to the core! It’s just mama I hurt Mama i hurt please comw.back to the family again I'd do anyhring I can in the world to help you You were the perfect mom and I couldn't ask for one better now I'm grown and realize im no.more than a letter. Cause That's what I delivered in the form.of a man post marked ready to ship with a golden boy tan. How selfish could 2 people ever so be take a family with the slightest flick of a key. Im talking 43 years and grandchildren to be. And you throw it all away just to think you're free. Yet in reality your just a host of a flee. He'll suck you dry til theres no more to see. It's already happened and become look at your destiny you've lost your meaning your purpose and your all family. Mama I beg you what I do isnt cheap I see your value and the cost it's doing to our family. Mama We love you we want you back to reap But the cut of rejection i fear is just to deep.
Hi @whays! Welcome to our feedback of 'Maternal Heartache #TDuB #whays #mamaihurt'! 💥 Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, bring it up a lil' to get the balance perfect. Your rhyming is dope, it sounds real nice. ✨ Love the natural sounding flow here. Very cool! 🎶 Your timing is great, nicely done. 🌠 The beat is fire, awesome choice. 🧨 Nice crisp recording. Sounds great! ✔ It's great how you portray raw emotion in this track, not an easy task but you've done it well! 💜 You've got serious skills, great work! 🔥 We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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