Stewarty Lapsley

life's hetic

Stewarty Lapsley
life's hetic

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15 Jan 2022

my lifes hetic my teachers told me it was time to change my tatics. sick of being called a spastic because i got no exams not even english or mathmatics but why would i want to go to class and do mathmatics when i could be out on the streets driving stolen automatics i was 13 when i was put on the spot trying to sell a bit of rock until the boys came up with a glock ...and he cocked it told me if i dont get of drugs and stop it hes going to pop it hes was going to shoot me in the head i looked in his eyes and told him to blast my brians all over the bed because inside i was already dead were am from people have no pity thats why i hate being brought up in belfast city the place is always in a collison the goverment has seperated us into different divisons and when somthing goes wrong he blames in on one of the religions this is why were all in this suition i use to take drugs to take away my anxiety but the drugs took away my family now am just a young bloke who wants to get rhe rope and wrapp it right round my thoat till it tightends cus am sick and tired of fighting thats why am on rap fame and started writing

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3 years ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

3 years ago

Hey @ak_69, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'life's hetic'! 💥 Try cleaning up the vocal recording quality by recording a little closer to the mic! Work on improving how you deliver your bars and different flows to your tracks. Timing is a difficult task, try ensure that you're on beat with your next track! See if you can clean up the recording quality, it's not helping the track. Try out a Masterclass if you're looking to hone your rap skills! We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Dope 🔥

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