Hey @jorelwilliams,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'keep on freestyle preview'! 💥
Some deep bars! "You gotta keep on pushing hard" - we love this attitude 💪 You got bars! Lyrics are on point, we like 'em a lot. 🙌 Good rhyming here, keep it up! ✨ We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. 👍 Real relaxed vibe to this 🌊
This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows!
This time you just missed out on Featuring 🌟, but here's what you can do to make it next time:
- Try and test out the distance between you and the mic🎤 before recording, this can make a huge difference to the quality! ✨
- Be yourself! True authenticity can really make people fall in love with your music! 🔥
- Remember to add dope cover art to your tracks to really show off your image and vibes! 🌊
- The best rappers take advice on board to improve! Make sure you engage with the Rap Fame community to help you shine bright! 💯
Thank you so much for your submission, we loved listening. We hope to hear more from you!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Hey @jorelwilliams, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'keep on freestyle preview'! 💥 Some deep bars! "You gotta keep on pushing hard" - we love this attitude 💪 You got bars! Lyrics are on point, we like 'em a lot. 🙌 Good rhyming here, keep it up! ✨ We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. 👍 Real relaxed vibe to this 🌊 This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! This time you just missed out on Featuring 🌟, but here's what you can do to make it next time: - Try and test out the distance between you and the mic🎤 before recording, this can make a huge difference to the quality! ✨ - Be yourself! True authenticity can really make people fall in love with your music! 🔥 - Remember to add dope cover art to your tracks to really show off your image and vibes! 🌊 - The best rappers take advice on board to improve! Make sure you engage with the Rap Fame community to help you shine bright! 💯 Thank you so much for your submission, we loved listening. We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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