Wassup @niblet,
Thank you for sharing 'smokka lotta pott' with our community π₯. Here is a little feedback from us:
Some nice rhyming on this, we hear you!
Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. πΆ You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off!
Good choice of beat here! πΌ
The track has a ton of personality and we like the storytelling style, you know how to paint a vivid picture. Loved the "pseudofed, sue the feds" wordplay, that was slick. Main issue here is the recording quality, the vocals are pretty unclear and the mix is inconstent.
Just a few tweaks and this track is almost there, keep grinding! π€
We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Wassup @niblet, Thank you for sharing 'smokka lotta pott' with our community π₯. Here is a little feedback from us: Some nice rhyming on this, we hear you! Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. πΆ You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off! Good choice of beat here! πΌ The track has a ton of personality and we like the storytelling style, you know how to paint a vivid picture. Loved the "pseudofed, sue the feds" wordplay, that was slick. Main issue here is the recording quality, the vocals are pretty unclear and the mix is inconstent. Just a few tweaks and this track is almost there, keep grinding! π€ We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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