stone cold

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flow so cold you could call me Sydney Austin, lyrics so sick like they off that Suboxone , i keep it current. careful might be shockin hapens often. are you chocking or that gas gotchu coffin, its killer, it could send you to your coffin but first your body will be lined with chalk an caution taped off. i keep a shotgun ridin shotgun but the stock is sawed off, did you OD or did you nod off. my flow is like heroin its addictive these lyrics dipict it, well making you sick. plus the pain they inflict itll send you to the crypt as i spill it out my lips well adding a few quips. the vewiers restricted. you thought it was fictitious but realized that im vicious and have malicious intentions, you could cut the tention with a knife but i might take it from you and take your life out of spite. then grab the mic and spit these bars so bazzar, they're as toxic like tar but logically correct even tho its chaotic and you want more like narcotics it could make me iconic spit em faster then sonic well still creating a beautiful sonnet where oh where is my bonnet god donnet its probably over the ocean dont cause a commotion, just smoke this weed shits got a potent component helps me stay focused in the moment so i can crush any opponent.

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N1BL3T

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5 years ago

Rap Fame A&R

5 years ago

Hey @niblet, We appreciate you sharing 'stone cold' with us! 💥 Man, this is a cool freestyle. Dope stuff. 🤩 This is how beats and lyrics should go together, you've got great timing for the most part, well done, but don't ease up! 🌠 The recording is a little fuzzy, try improving the sound quality if you can. Try out a Masterclass if you're looking to hone your rap skills just a bit more in the RF Studio! This is a nice piece! Main critique is the recording quality. Flows are dope tho so in your own time try to rerecord with a bit of distance from the mic or using a different mic if you can! Keep the passion. One. With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. 🤟 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

⭐️PHOENIXX⭐️

5 years ago

Dope as hell💯🔥🔥🔥

Chillin_Est

5 years ago

you killed it 🔥 👍

💥Mr.Lil Nutt🐿️(A.B.R Mobb)💥

5 days ago

Let’s GOOO 🍿 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Waxy Gordon

5 months ago

Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Dope 🔥