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It's time for us to take a look at 'my story'! π₯
Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. πΆ Great timing on the beat, there were only a couple of moments where it slipped.
Great beat choice, really works with the track!
Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track.
Why don't you try some autotune or reverb to really enhance your track?
A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. π€
Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Yo @freeborn19, It's time for us to take a look at 'my story'! π₯ Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. πΆ Great timing on the beat, there were only a couple of moments where it slipped. Great beat choice, really works with the track! Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track. Why don't you try some autotune or reverb to really enhance your track? A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. π€ Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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