Yo @bhkfasa!
Waddup. Let's take a look at 'Naive'! π₯
The vocal recording quality is great, don't change how you do it. π€
Okay, we hear the bars! Nice lyrics on this. π Your rhyming is dope, it sounds real nice. β¨ The track has meaning. π
Love the natural sounding flow here. Very cool! πΆ You'r riding that beat flawlessly, so confident. Great work. π
Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. πΌ
The recording is good quality, we can hear each element. β
Wow - you've got a big future, this track was perfect. Don't stop till you reach the top! π―
We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
Great track love the melodies, too much silence between your final chorus and the one that came previous @jufasa see if you can close the gap of space between your verses/lyrics and the beat itself by narrowing down the tracks overall compression, also you'd probably prefer it if your verses had a bit of depth to them meaning just a tad bit of reverberation just a tad. And also only applied to the chorus additions
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Used to be naive to certain things, but had to do some reflecting π―
WOW. Aye bro lemme say DAWG PERFECT ππΎ this going on my playlist this a great song
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Jufasa I need in my crew, you are priceless... holla at a real one @sexynemesis Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
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u snapped on this song jufasa π₯ check my music out to man Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
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Yo @bhkfasa! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'Naive'! π₯ The vocal recording quality is great, don't change how you do it. π€ Okay, we hear the bars! Nice lyrics on this. π Your rhyming is dope, it sounds real nice. β¨ The track has meaning. π Love the natural sounding flow here. Very cool! πΆ You'r riding that beat flawlessly, so confident. Great work. π Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. πΌ The recording is good quality, we can hear each element. β Wow - you've got a big future, this track was perfect. Don't stop till you reach the top! π― We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Great π
Great track love the melodies, too much silence between your final chorus and the one that came previous @jufasa see if you can close the gap of space between your verses/lyrics and the beat itself by narrowing down the tracks overall compression, also you'd probably prefer it if your verses had a bit of depth to them meaning just a tad bit of reverberation just a tad. And also only applied to the chorus additions
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
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