joyce
I straight up wrote this for you girl thanks. d to the l o I'm just saying hello I see you on the dance floor wiggling like some jello you probably got a man but unless you be like hell no I got a cigarillo let's smoke it and be mellow you you got me sweat it even though it's kind of cold. you hotter than the dime to meet you look like some gold I need something that's down not some kind of f****** hoe if I was just trying to smash I would just go down the road. I ain't a scholar but I'm smarter than the average I ain't a baller but I cultivate some cabbage I follow up with dreaming the end I'm living lavish girl I can't seem to get you off my mind like Lenny Kravitz we'll hit the finest wine and dinaries and I said Nick in your wrist with your favorite finery for you girl I'd buy your diamond refinery ride or die with you as long as you down with me. I want to know your most intimate fantasy are you camera shy can we dare to see if I dare to try would you handle me or would you lie to me and try to dismantle me. I paint you with picture I'm going to give you the vividness of the way that I would treat you and how we could be living this like I ain't trying to hold you down I don't need to have control. sometimes I act like a clown cuz laughter is good for your soul. I'm not aggressive but I never been a hoe. weather whatever whether we broke up on a roll. are you crazy sexy cool or just cool crazy sexy. always contemplate the view so i look at it complexly if I get out of line you could be the one that checks me 210 64 98 you can call it text me
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awesome now just so y'all all know now Joyce is actually a real chick. thank you sweet heart I'm glad you liked it
David your so badass! I love this song you wrote for me. lol I'm blushing. 😚☺
I got new battle please comment much respect either way fire lyrics till I die forever only honest votes much respect for giving me a chance 👌 💯 #TmTillMyTrunksFull hope you enjoy 👌
Hey @dlow151, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'joyce'! 💥 Your voice sounds super clear, just a few times it's been a bit low but it's a minor thing to me. 🤙 Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall! That's some good old G shit! Solid effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. 🙏 Dope old school beat, defo adds to the track. 🎼 We have a bunch of options to really add to your track, try using some effects on your vocals next time! Thank you so much for your submission, we loved listening. We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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thanks y'all I appreciate the feedback. much love
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