Ol'school crush

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It was rainy and cloudy.. i was new to the city..unbeknownst to me..I would meet you..that day was supposed to be a regular..chilling and Mackin.. I was nineteen..actin like the world was mine..a fool perhaps with no money and dreams ..I was already done with love..so I thought..I got to your school to recruit soldiers but I ended up getting shot when I saw your features... I wforgotwherei was..told my homeboy..I gotta get that..she belongs to me.. a light skin shorty was all I needed then.. eihhteyes..right thighs..right all the rest.. if I was married i' d made you my mistress.. I got the digits quite quick.. I left so satisfied..I forgot about the root of my pain..I came to find out you were vain but still..you made day that day..

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