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gettien money fucking bitches do this shit this way trapping every season now we shining like for days why talking to me you know she was just a bitch are was in the trencheis are didn't had no place to sleep trapping in the phone do this shit like every week he was just alone talking sleep on the seat on the street are never quite now am taking a receipt for a shit are really did you dont need to say aretripp when you really feel the drip are was taking to ma bro an he said is just a dream are was lonely in the cold now am feeling like a beam yh now the money really green fucking living like a team
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