need to mix up the melodies a bit on it flow, lyrics and bars are good just mix up the melody a bit. check out my music man keep pushing always try to do better
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I like the word play very creative definitely feel like this project was amazing keep pushing and keeping yourself happy please stop by
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Yo @9leafgivenchy,
It's time for us to take a look at 'Better'! ๐ฅ
Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix.
Your rhyming is tight. โจ
Love the natural sounding flow here. Very cool! ๐ถ Your flow is really getting there! You only missed the beat like once and otherwise you were killing it.
We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em!
Try practising effects more to see how they work best.
Chill AF! Serious vibes on this one!
The track has a nice low key feel to it, you're taking your time with that flow and it works. The main issue it that the vocals sound super muffled and don't have much presence, ease off the vocals a little for a more impactful vocal delivery!
You got talent, you just need to polish your tracks a bit more! You're almost there!
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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need to mix up the melodies a bit on it flow, lyrics and bars are good just mix up the melody a bit. check out my music man keep pushing always try to do better Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
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I like the word play very creative definitely feel like this project was amazing keep pushing and keeping yourself happy please stop by Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Yo @9leafgivenchy, It's time for us to take a look at 'Better'! ๐ฅ Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix. Your rhyming is tight. โจ Love the natural sounding flow here. Very cool! ๐ถ Your flow is really getting there! You only missed the beat like once and otherwise you were killing it. We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em! Try practising effects more to see how they work best. Chill AF! Serious vibes on this one! The track has a nice low key feel to it, you're taking your time with that flow and it works. The main issue it that the vocals sound super muffled and don't have much presence, ease off the vocals a little for a more impactful vocal delivery! You got talent, you just need to polish your tracks a bit more! You're almost there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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Love the vibe...Smooth and bars. Hey I mix and master if u need help
nicely done ๐ฏ Fam
@9leafgivenchy come check out my new song I posted up. #NotReady2
good work bro put your ears on my new song #DOLLADAEB2C
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