dear mama
mama don't worry about me today it's all about you mama your love is real to me it felt like the truth believe it or not my mama is the best you niggas are cool with your presence mama life is good it's all about you love is the subject The object is you I'll take a bullet for you there is a war outside am good as a troop highly trained for protecting you I was young and stupid putting pressure on you making demands you supplied with the truth mama mama am fighting for you the bread winner look I'll never lose
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