dear mama

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dear mama

mama don't worry about me today it's all about you mama your love is real to me it felt like the truth believe it or not my mama is the best you niggas are cool with your presence mama life is good it's all about you love is the subject The object is you I'll take a bullet for you there is a war outside am good as a troop highly trained for protecting you I was young and stupid putting pressure on you making demands you supplied with the truth mama mama am fighting for you the bread winner look I'll never lose

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5 years ago

See track description โ†‘

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5 years ago

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๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ‘ป๐Ÿ†• Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

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5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 7/10 Bars: Great ๐ŸŽ‰ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: On point ๐ŸŽฏ

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Here are my scores: Bars: 7/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: On point ๐ŸŽฏ Delivery: Great ๐ŸŽ‰ Impression: Great ๐ŸŽ‰

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#GRUMPYateFIFTY Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

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5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect ๐Ÿ’ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐Ÿ’ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐Ÿ’ฏ

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23 days ago

Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

9 months ago

Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

5 years ago

Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

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5 years ago

dear mama โœŒ๐Ÿฟโค๏ธ

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Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Bars: Great ๐ŸŽ‰ Delivery: Great ๐ŸŽ‰ Impression: Great ๐ŸŽ‰

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