Can You Feel Me.
[Hook]: Young nigga tryna make it out into this college thang Doing for my moms and my paps couldn't even understand Living life without a middle man I'm going now and then>>> I don't give a damn I'm straight stratch like a rubber band Listen to the baseline then you can feel the verse vibe From the west side where everybody loves the sunshine Put it down my best rhyme the whole place was buck wild it's a wild life from South side where you find a Big Five : Verse (slow) As I'm turning 19 the legendary in Vans And when I make it out they gonna pay me full in advance Spin kick with my raps I'm feeling like a Van Damme That's all what I have so now I close my pen It's depend when I'm writing in the pad Money on mind nigga I don't give a damn Don't relax hommie cause I'm coming with a plan that's my fuckin name,the real name God's Plan yes I am From the Government living life like an Aftermath this is who I am Slim shady like an Eminem Im aiming them The Black boy in the hood yeah I'm serving them Speaking truly to my people yeah I'm not a politician I got to play a part where these suckers part to piss in If you gate it you can diss me As Imma about to pick in (Bridge) (slow) Left my haters behind they can't survive Automatically dawg I'm the device most thing to ever happen is to give them advice to show your other side on behalf of your pride : Just tell me what you got Just tell me what you need cause I got alot to give thank God I receive(X2) (Outro) [Do this raps nigga till the day die Till I fly nigga by the way I'm feeling high (Till the day I die)X2 Nigga doing freestyles till the day I die]
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[Hook]: Young nigga tryna make it out into this college thang Doing for my moms and my paps couldn't even understand Living life without a middle man I'm going now and then>>> I don't give a damn I'm straight stratch like a rubber band Listen to the baseline then you can feel the verse vibe From the west side where everybody loves the sunshine Put it down my best rhyme the whole place was buck wild it's a wild life from South side where you find a Big Five : Verse (slow) As I'm turning 19 the legendary in Vans And when I make it out they gonna pay me full in advance Spin kick with my raps I'm feeling like a Van Damme That's all what I have so now I close my pen It's depend when I'm writing in the pad Money on mind nigga I don't give a damn Don't relax hommie cause I'm coming with a plan that's my fuckin name,the real name God's Plan yes I am From the Government living life like an Aftermath this is who I am Slim shady like an Eminem Im aiming them The Black boy in the hood yeah I'm serving them Speaking truly to my people yeah I'm not a politician I got to play a part where these suckers part to piss in If you gate it you can diss me As Imma about to pick in (Bridge) (slow) Left my haters behind they can't survive Automatically dawg I'm the device most thing to ever happen is to give them advice to show your other side on behalf of your pride : Just tell me what you got Just tell me what you need cause I got alot to give thank God I receive(X2) (Outro) [Do this raps nigga till the day die Till I fly nigga by the way I'm feeling high (Till the day I die)X2 Nigga doing freestyles till the day I die]
peace and love till I got ya'll.
Hey @cebolenkosimyeni, We're gonna review your track 'Can You Feel Me.'. Let's get it! Love the natural sounding flow here. Very cool! 🎶 You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. 🙏 Good choice of beat! 🎼 The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality. aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Just a couple small changes and this track would really be a testament to your skills! 🤟 We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
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the flow is beautiful you just gotta mix this shit properly bro I couldn't hear it the way I wanted
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