This just off the top I didnβt write this at all I be a lot better if I did but this just freestyle by me thank u everyone that came and visit my page . I love the energy here
Hi there @reddi5tar,
Here's some feedback on your track 'Story Telling (17:34:34)', thank you for sharing with us! π₯
Using headphones will cut out the feedback and really help the quality. π§
Your vocals are just a bit quiet compared to the beat, try turning them up for a more balanced mix!
Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics.
We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. πΌ
We can see the potential there, keep hustlin' and your tracks will improve in no time. π
It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! π
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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I appreciate @rapfame_ar_team feedback and Iβm going to fix my errors and make this better
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Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great π Delivery: Great π Impression: Great π
This just off the top I didnβt write this at all I be a lot better if I did but this just freestyle by me thank u everyone that came and visit my page . I love the energy here
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great π Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Hi there @reddi5tar, Here's some feedback on your track 'Story Telling (17:34:34)', thank you for sharing with us! π₯ Using headphones will cut out the feedback and really help the quality. π§ Your vocals are just a bit quiet compared to the beat, try turning them up for a more balanced mix! Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. πΌ We can see the potential there, keep hustlin' and your tracks will improve in no time. π It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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