bottled up but still in a cage

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bottled up but still in a cage

truth is all I feel is Rage I don't feel any emotion just nothing but shame scared of not knowing if I'm actually sane worried my son will grow up not knowing his daddy's real name there's no way to describe what it's like to be erased worse than any cut from a knife or even being stabbed in the face don't ask me if I'm alright when you decided to make me fade and after you ran around and told the whole town that I ran away you played dirty with your games but I love you still I still would have stayed but seeing how you don't feel the same there's nothing thatll ever change I don't care what you say you already know my fate and no way way will I ever be okay you ended my life when you stopped being a good mother or wife and took my kids away it's obvious in black and white that after this whole fight you're the only one who had something to gain I understand but I still love you and how there will never be for me a happily ever after I just want to say a little Killy your gonna have to watch out for your brother and you and Corey both are going to have to look after your mother and most importantly of all you're going to have to look after each other all I can do is pray the one day you'll get this letter start by saying always stay living for the day not worried about tomorrow or you'll end up regretting everything when you look in the mirror and see your drowning in sorrow don't worry about the future or what it'll bring I promise there will always be endless possibilities tomorrow and daddy will always be here waiting patiently and you always follow

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5 years ago

truth is all I feel is Rage I don't feel any emotion just nothing but shame scared of not knowing if I'm actually sane worried my son will grow up not knowing his daddy's real name there's no way to describe what it's like to be erased worse than any cut from a knife or even being stabbed in the face don't ask me if I'm alright when you decided to make me fade and after you ran around and told the whole town that I ran away you played dirty with your games but I love you still I still would have stayed but seeing how you don't feel the same there's nothing thatll ever change I don't care what you say you already know my fate and no way way will I ever be okay you ended my life when you stopped being a good mother or wife and took my kids away it's obvious in black and white that after this whole fight you're the only one who had something to gain I understand but I still love you and how there will never be for me a happily ever after I just want to say a little Killy your gonna have to watch out for your brother and you and Corey both are going to have to look after your mother and most importantly of all you're going to have to look after each other all I can do is pray the one day you'll get this letter start by saying always stay living for the day not worried about tomorrow or you'll end up regretting everything when you look in the mirror and see your drowning in sorrow don't worry about the future or what it'll bring I promise there will always be endless possibilities tomorrow and daddy will always be here waiting patiently and you always follow

5 years ago

Hey @brochclip, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'bottled up but still in a cage'! ๐Ÿ’ฅ Loving the concept of this track, it has real purpose. ๐Ÿ‘ Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. ๐ŸŽผ Laaaaid back! We're feeling the chill on this one. ๐ŸŒŠ Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. ๐Ÿ‘Œ We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! ๐Ÿ™Œ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐Ÿ˜Ž

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