New Morning

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@izag @bill.m.buttlicker @echochamber21 Y'all thought I was Done False indeed I just fell asleep From The amount of weed I sound crazy Im dissin dummy Silly monkey better Tell me Why y'all feel the need To shit on your dinner table drop the cheap speed, see it in a different angle You know The shit's here sitting in the little bag Dont be weird Gimme money From your moneybag Problem is you fools cannot handle me because you see me as your enemy But I'm not. Im just showin the way to lead If you dont get it then maybe its time to leave Still, dont get me wrong I want your crap rap gone you can either get better Or lost before the dawn I do what it takes you see Not an enemy nor friend to be I'm the new Sheriff in your little town the man with the power To lay your ass feets under ground So better take a shower And get your shit together You hazy motherfucker And let me show you what a man Who's Born a fighter can do Trust me, you'll stop laughin' Cause the joke's on you Aint nobody putting me down Thats fuckin' true Now you the one on the ground you got no clue Who's the man who smashed another punk Down Cause what y'all making is 'showin y'all clowns Cannot even properly rhyme Your shit Is just shit Mine shit's sublime You Still Pretend you did crime? Get your head off your ass now Cause Its time The only crime you realy did was your fake ass rap sound. It is all about the shit You think you gotta commit To get in the Game You're making this all up To prove you're the same As me And He And every other G But you can't fool us, see You wasn't on the street You're Just another baby Failing to show to me What Im supposed to see crack your head with speed not a rapper to be You's a dirty ass junkie

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Dr Jaykill

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5 years ago

Lord-Plourde

4 years ago

when we're definitely very hard fire I loved everything you did please Push by and show some love to me Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

🥵RAPcHORDu🔥FLAMe🤒

4 years ago

The only crime you did was a fake ass rap sound…. LMFPO!!!!

Bo Jangles

4 years ago

Please check out my music and let me know what you think about it Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

🐲<|MC DORAKU|>🐲

5 years ago

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Rap Fame A&R

5 years ago

Yo @bill.m.buttlicker, It's time for us to take a look at 'New Morning'! 💥 Make sure you put headphones in on your next track as the feedback is affecting the recording quality! We like the rhymes in here, good job.✨ Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. 🎶 The beat is fire, nice choice. 🎼 This is some super technical rapping, we really enjoyed the storytelling aspect. A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. 🤟 Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Jeff Nelson

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Dope 🔥

Gemathebears Indonesian

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

YOUNG SAUVAGE

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Adamiyat iman

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Great 🎉