Hi there @benellisjr.,
Here's some feedback on your track 'Maybe there's still hope', thank you for sharing with us! ๐ฅ
Using a headset will hugely improve the recording quality here, consider giving it a try! ๐ง
Have a think about where the rhyming words fall in relation to the rhythm to improve the rhyme scheme.
Work on improving how you deliver your bars and different flows to your tracks.
We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. ๐ผ
Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! ๐
We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! ๐ช
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Can improve ๐
keep grinding Bars: On point ๐ฏ Delivery: Nice ๐ Impression: On point ๐ฏ
Hi there @benellisjr., Here's some feedback on your track 'Maybe there's still hope', thank you for sharing with us! ๐ฅ Using a headset will hugely improve the recording quality here, consider giving it a try! ๐ง Have a think about where the rhyming words fall in relation to the rhythm to improve the rhyme scheme. Work on improving how you deliver your bars and different flows to your tracks. We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. ๐ผ Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! ๐ We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! ๐ช All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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