Hi @veganvonte!
Welcome to our feedback of 'Needs and Wants'! ๐ฅ
This beat is way too loud, turn it down a lil' bit so we can hear your bars clearer.
Pretty good rhyming here. Try working on your delivery a bit more, make sure it all flow without breaks and pauses. Like that laid-back vibe, and the beat helps ideally to achieve that!
With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. ๐ค
We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! ๐
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Hi @veganvonte! Welcome to our feedback of 'Needs and Wants'! ๐ฅ This beat is way too loud, turn it down a lil' bit so we can hear your bars clearer. Pretty good rhyming here. Try working on your delivery a bit more, make sure it all flow without breaks and pauses. Like that laid-back vibe, and the beat helps ideally to achieve that! With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. ๐ค We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! ๐ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Great ๐
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 7/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: On point ๐ฏ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Hip-hop royalty in the flesh! Keep the tunes coming! ๐ Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ