Hi @peterparker.4854!
Welcome to our feedback of 'Slippin'! π₯
Your vocals are the perfect level over the beat, keep mixing like that. β
Your rhyming is tight. It's very impressive that you kept the same rhyme throughout the whole track - "vision" , "slippin" , "missing" etc. β¨
Nice choice of beat, this is sounding nice with your delivery style. πΌ
There's so much energy in your delivery, awesome!! π₯΅
If you are looking for ways to improve, I recommend trying to switch up the flows a lil' more to keep the listener engaged. Perhaps try to listen to some of your favourite artists and see how they do it.
Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. π€
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
Hi @peterparker.4854! Welcome to our feedback of 'Slippin'! π₯ Your vocals are the perfect level over the beat, keep mixing like that. β Your rhyming is tight. It's very impressive that you kept the same rhyme throughout the whole track - "vision" , "slippin" , "missing" etc. β¨ Nice choice of beat, this is sounding nice with your delivery style. πΌ There's so much energy in your delivery, awesome!! π₯΅ If you are looking for ways to improve, I recommend trying to switch up the flows a lil' more to keep the listener engaged. Perhaps try to listen to some of your favourite artists and see how they do it. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. π€ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 7/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great π Delivery: On point π― Impression: Dope π₯
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 7/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Great π Impression: On point π―
Here are my scores: Bars: 7/10 Delivery: 6/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: On point π― Delivery: Nice π Impression: Dope π₯
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
I feel it! π€π€ Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Keep grinding β Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯