very good I love the strong word play pay attention to rest in peace this was a very creative concept and he was telling the Deep story and the vocals were a little lower than the beat I would have liked a little bit of better production but other than that it was a great song I hope to see you support some of my music
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very good I love the strong word play pay attention to rest in peace this was a very creative concept and he was telling the Deep story and the vocals were a little lower than the beat I would have liked a little bit of better production but other than that it was a great song I hope to see you support some of my music Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Hi there @shannonclaytor, Here's some feedback on your track 'Pay Attention ', thank you for sharing with us! ๐ฅ Your rhyming is tight. โจ Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. ๐ถ Great beat choice, really works with the track! To improve on your sound, play around with the built in audio effects that Rap Fame offer! There's clearly talent there, keep grindin' and soon you will be a top tier rapper. ๐ค It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! ๐ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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