spin
my stashka got mad, im barely her man now watch out for the sun, ima wip with yo ass, she say im insanse yeah , wanna blow my brain, but she dont know anything yeah bunny with the lips fuck that shit i dont really care if you cry wait i care spin on my head like a fidget spinner voicemail at the phone is better omg do i really fucking care?
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Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Yo @yesphone, It's time for us to take a look at 'spin'! ๐ฅ The beat is drowning out the vocals a little, try turning the vocals up! This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! This beat is working well for you! ๐ผ Dope work with the effects, nicely done. โญ You know how to create an atmosphere. Your bars could use some work, try focusin on that area and you'll be more well rounded as a rapper. It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! ๐ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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