HE77
HE77

spin

spin

197 Plays

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08 Oct 2021

my stashka got mad, im barely her man now watch out for the sun, ima wip with yo ass, she say im insanse yeah , wanna blow my brain, but she dont know anything yeah bunny with the lips fuck that shit i dont really care if you cry wait i care spin on my head like a fidget spinner voicemail at the phone is better omg do i really fucking care?

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Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

3 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

3 years ago

Yo @yesphone, It's time for us to take a look at 'spin'! ๐Ÿ’ฅ The beat is drowning out the vocals a little, try turning the vocals up! This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! This beat is working well for you! ๐ŸŽผ Dope work with the effects, nicely done. โญ You know how to create an atmosphere. Your bars could use some work, try focusin on that area and you'll be more well rounded as a rapper. It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! ๐Ÿ™Œ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐Ÿ˜Ž

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