shake

2 years ago

thanks 👍

Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @frederickwright.8056! Waddup - let's take a look at 'The One'! Your rhyming is dope, it sounds real nice. Try improving your recording quality if you can. Good choice of beat! Real chill, we love this vibe! Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

shake

3 years ago

you know I love you girl more than anything you got my heart in it it's like a hurricane you ripped it up in pieces baby what a shame I'm trying to I'm trying to so you did this love is real you came into my life and showed me what it mean to live I took some shit for granite baby but I know I need you still sometimes I pray and ask the Lord will the hurt be healed i never knew that I could love until you switch my gears i want you in my life forever not just for some years I see my future with you very bright and No More tears I'm trying to make you my forever you know hers and his I'm trying to treat you like a queen and show you that its real you know I love you girl more than anything you got my heart in it it's like a hurricane you ripped it up at pieces baby what a shame somebody called my doctor my heart is insane I need your body girl so come and be my medicine