the origin

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the origin

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5 years ago

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5 years ago

ok,I will get it down next time

5 years ago

Hey @bigskittle07! Thanks for sharing 'the origin ' with us! Good choice of beat! Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little. Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

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