Hey @bigskittle07!
Thanks for sharing 'the origin ' with us!
Good choice of beat!
Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little. Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent!
Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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ok,I will get it down next time
Hey @bigskittle07! Thanks for sharing 'the origin ' with us! Good choice of beat! Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little. Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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