trapped
lost in the mind of a reaccuring homicide carry the victims to locate the rights of time its a shame how far the apple falls from the tree if i back down tortured for eternity wanna feel your soul leave. wanna see your eyes turn dark and watch your body bleed. sending payment hoping to be set free so many fucking demons watching me. continue to make horror picture show 3 souls sacrificed 6 more to go taking lives to further my own my demons send me praise for the payments bestowed looking back at the victimistic rituals and every sacrifice that ive propose. never standing down never looking back now sacrificing souls hell is where we gonna go. i am mercury demon that will wait for you i am mercury torture the weak and let the strong through looking in the eyes of a victim being horrified releasing symptoms showcasing whats rightly mine its a shame how far the apple falls from the tree if i back down tortured for eternity gotta feel your soul leave. gotta see your eyes turn dark and watch your body bleed. sending payment hoping to be set free so many fucking demons watching me carry on with the rituals for my inner spiritual feeling something taking over me guided by the shadow demon throught the depths of hell. i dont know where ill end up and ill never tell. i am mercury demon that will wait for you i am mercury torture the weak and let the strong through #disciplesofdeath
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lost in the mind of a reaccuring homicide carry the victims to locate the rights of time its a shame how far the apple falls from the tree if i back down tortured for eternity wanna feel your soul leave. wanna see your eyes turn dark and watch your body bleed. sending payment hoping to be set free so many fucking demons watching me. continue to make horror picture show 3 souls sacrificed 6 more to go taking lives to further my own my demons send me praise for the payments bestowed looking back at the victimistic rituals and every sacrifice that ive propose. never standing down never looking back now sacrificing souls hell is where we gonna go. i am mercury demon that will wait for you i am mercury torture the weak and let the strong through looking in the eyes of a victim being horrified releasing symptoms showcasing whats rightly mine its a shame how far the apple falls from the tree if i back down tortured for eternity gotta feel your soul leave. gotta see your eyes turn dark and watch your body bleed. sending payment hoping to be set free so many fucking demons watching me carry on with the rituals for my inner spiritual feeling something taking over me guided by the shadow demon throught the depths of hell. i dont know where ill end up and ill never tell. i am mercury demon that will wait for you i am mercury torture the weak and let the strong through #disciplesofdeath
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Hey @Mercury666, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'trapped'! 💥 Your vocals are just a bit quiet compared to the beat, try turning them up for a more balanced mix! Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. 🎶 This beat is working well for you! 🎼 Dope work with the effects, nicely done. ⭐ Enjoying the menacing vibe here, nice job. Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! 💪 It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
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This beat is a tornado of vibes, got me in a whirlwind of excitement! 🌪️🎶 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
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