lilwats

7 months ago

DOPE 🍀

Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @jackwatson.7372! Welcome to our feedback of 'Baby be my boo:3'! Good choice of beat! Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. You're not quite on beat, we suggest workin on your timing a little. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Jack Watson

3 years ago

aye ye let's do this it was 2019 that I first saw you didnt realise that Ill luve u ik we friends but ain't gonna stop me if I ask u out you'll say no prolly all dis shit I wanna say is coming out madly we r friends n I wanna change that baby be my boo baby dont look back even tho my heart is doomed it wasnt to long ago me n u started talking never tried being fast cus I prefer walking maybe I shud of tried make friendship our die how cud u be so blind to not realise we r friends n I wanna change that baby be my boo baby don't look back even tho my heart is doomed yh baby me n u r ment forever even tho you'll realise never ma heart is burning like an ember u can be snow cool like december Even when u leave then I'll remeber the day we met yeah