SLeepybox
SLeepybox

better person

better person

6 Plays

14 Sep 2021

why do i try to be the same person i am when people tell me i aint shit quit commit shit shoudn't be here then baby tell me why everybody be hating me im try be who i am the best at being seeing foreseeing agreeing that life is a mess I confess fuck all the haters that say i couldn't be shit now here i am up in the clouds eith his telling me imma be a bigger picture then anyone but he told me you make a friend named tayg you know what i said aye thats gonna be a good good life that aint going to feel like shit at least ill have a fucking friend

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3 years ago

Hi @jaymelkic! Welcome to our feedback of 'better person'! The beat is fire, nice choice. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Practice different effects on different tracks and see how things come out. Great energy, such chill vibes. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

3 years ago

why do i try to be the same person i am when people tell me i aint shit quit commit shit shoudn't be here then baby tell me why everybody be hating me im try be who i am the best at being seeing foreseeing agreeing that life is a mess I confess fuck all the haters that say i couldn't be shit now here i am up in the clouds eith his telling me imma be a bigger picture then anyone but he told me you make a friend named tayg you know what i said aye thats gonna be a good good life that aint going to feel like shit at least ill have a fucking friend

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