Yo @tyronepage!
Waddup - let's take a look at 'first time'!
The vocals sound great, nicely done!
Try practising effects more to see how they work best.
Nice flow here - delivery is so important. The beat is dope and really works for this track. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire.
Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 7/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: On point 🎯
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Yo @tyronepage! Waddup - let's take a look at 'first time'! The vocals sound great, nicely done! Try practising effects more to see how they work best. Nice flow here - delivery is so important. The beat is dope and really works for this track. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
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Salute to the grind, your authenticity shines through! 🙌✨ Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥