Hey @zayfrmct860!
Thanks for sharing 'MONEY (17:50:08)' with us!
Your vocals are a great volume in the mix, nicely done. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track!
Practice writin' unique lyrics that will make your music really stand out, perhaps try less explicit language too.
Good choice of beat! Awesome energy in your delivery, well done! Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there.
Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
ONE THING I CAN SAY OBOUT YOU MR.Zaydarapper,IS THAT YOU'VE GOT GOOD TIMING ON THE BEAT,AND THAT'S VERY IMPORTENT IN RAPPING;I'AM NOT TELLING YOU HOW, OR WHAT TO RAP OBOUT YOUNG-BLOOD,BUT I'D WISH YOU TAKE YOUR TIME COMING UP IN THIS
DANGEROUS GAME,CAUSE IT LOOKS LIKE YOU'RE SPEEDING,I JUST WANT YOU TO BE CAREFULL.
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Hey @zayfrmct860! Thanks for sharing 'MONEY (17:50:08)' with us! Your vocals are a great volume in the mix, nicely done. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Practice writin' unique lyrics that will make your music really stand out, perhaps try less explicit language too. Good choice of beat! Awesome energy in your delivery, well done! Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
ONE THING I CAN SAY OBOUT YOU MR.Zaydarapper,IS THAT YOU'VE GOT GOOD TIMING ON THE BEAT,AND THAT'S VERY IMPORTENT IN RAPPING;I'AM NOT TELLING YOU HOW, OR WHAT TO RAP OBOUT YOUNG-BLOOD,BUT I'D WISH YOU TAKE YOUR TIME COMING UP IN THIS DANGEROUS GAME,CAUSE IT LOOKS LIKE YOU'RE SPEEDING,I JUST WANT YOU TO BE CAREFULL.
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