Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @jaybeezie! Thanks for sharing 'yep it seems to be' with us! Your vocals are the perfect level over the beat, keep mixing like that. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. The beat is dope and really works for this track. The recording is good quality, we can hear each element. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. Real hot freestyling, keep that up! Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

JayBeezie

3 years ago

dead star, shine light up the sky I'm all out of breath my walls are closing in days just been going by give me a sign come back to the end the shepherd of the damned I can feel you falling away no longer the lost no longer the same and I can see you starting to break I'll keep you alive if you show me the way forever and ever the scars will remain I'm falling apart leave me here forever in the dark daylight dies blackout the sky does anyone care is anybody there take this life empty inside I'm already dead I'll rise to fall again I can feel you falling away no longer the lost no longer the same God help me I've come undone out of the light of the sun God help me I've come undone I can feel you falling away