😈pick up the pen 😈
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Pick up the pen, Write down the that Come from your head from the heart. Even the Best rappers ever had to Start Somewhere, Very far from the end. So pick up the pen. Write down the that Come to your mind. If you’re not serious, then You may never find The voice inside So once again, Yo pick up the pen.
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Pick up the pen, Write down the that Come from your head from the heart. Even the Best rappers ever had to Start Somewhere, Very far from the end. So pick up the pen. Write down the that Come to your mind. If you’re not serious, then You may never find The voice inside So once again, Yo pick up the pen.
#280kplayz Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
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Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉
Hey @ontaymobb! Thanks for sharing '😈pick up the pen 😈' with us! Nice flow here - delivery is so important. Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix. The beat is fire, nice choice. The effects are done well, keep doin' what you're doin'. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Here are my scores: Bars: 7/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: On point 🎯 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Dope 🔥
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
The grind is real, and so is the impact. Every effort is paying off! 💼💰 GANG GANG 🤘 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
The hustle in your flow is real, this track is a testament to your grind! 💪🎶 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥