Hey @ava_g!
Thanks for sharing 'when I didn't know the real me.' with us!
Your vocals are the perfect volume, nicely done.
Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars.
The beat is fire, nice choice. The recording is solid, everything is clear. Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it!
Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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growing up was a dark-light cigarette
This a heaven 💯 dope
good vibes good flow stay lit stay grinding 💪 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Hey @ava_g! Thanks for sharing 'when I didn't know the real me.' with us! Your vocals are the perfect volume, nicely done. Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. The beat is fire, nice choice. The recording is solid, everything is clear. Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 7/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: On point 🎯 Impression: Great 🎉
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
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The energy in this track is straight-up frosty, got me feeling all day! ❄️💥 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥