world fell apart
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because it insipered me to rap while I was in prison to tell my dad how I've been since he passed away and how my life hasn't been all that good
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because it insipered me to rap while I was in prison to tell my dad how I've been since he passed away and how my life hasn't been all that good
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Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Great ๐ Impression: Great ๐
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Real pain makes real music
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thanks rap fame I will work on it
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Hi @jouiniorstaggs! Welcome to our feedback of 'world fell apart'! Your voice sounds super clear, keep recording like that! Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. You're not quite on beat, we suggest workin on your timing a little. Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential! The beat is fire, nice choice. Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
#4SWYPELOVE Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Great ๐ Impression: Great ๐
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ