Hi @jaystayspinnin!
Welcome to our feedback of 'Onna Come Up'!
We think the delivery is fire, keep it up.
Your voice sounds a bit fuzzy, could you try recording closer to the mic? Practice writin' unique lyrics that will make your music really stand out. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent!
The beat is fire, nice choice.
Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Hi @jaystayspinnin! Welcome to our feedback of 'Onna Come Up'! We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. Your voice sounds a bit fuzzy, could you try recording closer to the mic? Practice writin' unique lyrics that will make your music really stand out. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! The beat is fire, nice choice. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team