Grateful Remix
it's velle yall sober 6 clique (where yall at) as a recovering alcoholic and coke head (yeah that's right) it's a muhphuckin epidemic out in this piece (real talk) whether its drank, meth, hank, fentinal, pills ex or whatever( we dying mane) I found that there's a solution for the (phenomenon of craving) which means when I start I can't stop I'm gonna show a little bit about this journey(journey)of recovery that I go through let's go Up early in the morning you can see me on my knees(with God) see Yo boy is really chronic so I'm treating my disease(My disease) that kills me and even touches those I love Im so selfish full of fear and had me not giv-in a fuck for some background, /abandoned in these streets (in these streets ) little project kid/ that later grew into a beast(to a beast) let's keep it G,( let's keep it G) what's my problem, tell the truth it's really me I'm saying that up in the mirror and through prayer see it clearer I'm Grateful for the breath up in my lungs for surviving dope addiction even clapping with them guns IM GRATEFUL now now I lay me down to sleep dreamin dreaming wit some peace I'm a different kinda beast I'm Grateful but still beating up the streets man I'm looking for them trap slaves seekin out relief I'm Grateful you you don't have to know the way you can follow my lead I'm just sowin my seeds 2 for 3 223's all the lingo in the mine fields chasing that relief and acceptance on my mind still stress hawkin like Holiday and I Buck just a fiend wit a dream can it be that I am stuck believe or be deceived by the disease that I proceed to the freedom that I NEED now I'm clean &HEAR IT RING Put the drank down no mo cocaine up in the back ground resentments, ima get thems is a symptom, I forgive em I'm Grateful load my bag with 12 smooth stones see these steps that I been living got me in a NEW ZONE in the sober game I can keep it real or stay blown fetinyl till I'm killed or try to drink it till I'm gone problems still persist matter fact they get bigger strain from the stress felt so deep its in the liver paralyzing fear ... fear I'm a make it clear... clear turn it over to power who can make it disappear pear believe
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it's velle yall sober 6 clique (where yall at) as a recovering alcoholic and coke head (yeah that's right) it's a muhphuckin epidemic out in this piece (real talk) whether its drank, meth, hank, fentinal, pills ex or whatever( we dying mane) I found that there's a solution for the (phenomenon of craving) which means when I start I can't stop I'm gonna show a little bit about this journey(journey)of recovery that I go through let's go Up early in the morning you can see me on my knees(with God) see Yo boy is really chronic so I'm treating my disease(My disease) that kills me and even touches those I love Im so selfish full of fear and had me not giv-in a fuck for some background, /abandoned in these streets (in these streets ) little project kid/ that later grew into a beast(to a beast) let's keep it G,( let's keep it G) what's my problem, tell the truth it's really me I'm saying that up in the mirror and through prayer see it clearer I'm Grateful for the breath up in my lungs for surviving dope addiction even clapping with them guns IM GRATEFUL now now I lay me down to sleep dreamin dreaming wit some peace I'm a different kinda beast I'm Grateful but still beating up the streets man I'm looking for them trap slaves seekin out relief I'm Grateful you you don't have to know the way you can follow my lead I'm just sowin my seeds 2 for 3 223's all the lingo in the mine fields chasing that relief and acceptance on my mind still stress hawkin like Holiday and I Buck just a fiend wit a dream can it be that I am stuck believe or be deceived by the disease that I proceed to the freedom that I NEED now I'm clean &HEAR IT RING Put the drank down no mo cocaine up in the back ground resentments, ima get thems is a symptom, I forgive em I'm Grateful load my bag with 12 smooth stones see these steps that I been living got me in a NEW ZONE in the sober game I can keep it real or stay blown fetinyl till I'm killed or try to drink it till I'm gone problems still persist matter fact they get bigger strain from the stress felt so deep its in the liver paralyzing fear ... fear I'm a make it clear... clear turn it over to power who can make it disappear pear believe
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great π Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Great π
Hi @vell6001! Welcome to our feedback of 'Grateful Remix'! π₯ Good bars here, defo works here! π Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! The beat is dope and really works for this track. πΌ We need to clean up the recording quality here, play around with it and see what you can do! This is some deep lyricism, love it! We're super impressed with this, you got talent! π₯ It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
please follow me Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great π Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Great π
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯