grasshopper
31 Plays
•28 Aug 2021
Life is hard,@hop666 Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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Yo @homer69! Waddup - let's take a look at 'grasshopper'! Good choice of beat! Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Work on your timing a little to make sure you hit the beat perfectly. Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential! Your improvisation is dope, keep up that lyrical fire. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Life is hard,@hop666 Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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