life

27 Plays

28 Aug 2021

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.

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3 years ago

oh ok thank you

3 years ago

Yo @supremeiam! Waddup - let's take a look at 'life'! Good choice of beat! Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. You're not quite on beat, we suggest workin on your timing a little. We suggest working on your improvisating a little to take your track to the next level. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

3 years ago

thanks for listening

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